Untitled Erotic Poem.

Wrote this for a friend. She requested it. I am a writer, but this was my first erotic piece, and so far my only one. So please be kind with comments. ^_^ Hope you enjoy

Your soft chocolate expression, your lustful eyes
I can hear them screaming, particularly my name
The urges and temptations, oh, the thoughts
They all collide as I lose myself in your dark skinned beauty
Our bodies in full nakedness
My fingers, traveling your body slowly and softly
I can feel your hot breathe beating my neck at my touch
The heat ascends as we give in to our urges
My lips meeting yours
My tongue slithering to yours like a snake, colliding in a wild dance
My fingers trailing down into your thighs, meeting with the moist lips awaiting me
In just moments, at the chime of the clock, our bodies collide.
The sweet melody of lust filling our ears
The clawing of backs, and my grasps of your dark thighs
Oh, the sound of your voice squealing as I finally invade your insides
A whole length throbbing within you as we whisper sensually into each other's ears
I finally get the taste of your marvelous brown mounds, cupping my watering lips around your light chocolate nipples.
I savor the erect ends against my tongue, and pull at them lustfully.
The thickness of my self hammering away at your insides as your merciless lover.
The familiar sensation running through our bodies as we both reach that moment of highest ecstasy
The few seconds feeling like hours of enjoyment
It all comes to an end as I fill your insides with the warm fluids that you enjoy so much.
Our bodies shutter at the release of both our warm cum, seeping from your stretched lips, over my thick cock
I now lay my head onto your soft breasts like pillow, my tongue occasionally still tracing your nipples.