Shower in darkness

I love the mystery and unknowing excitement of the dark. I believe it heightens your other senses for amore pleasurable experience. I also love the sex in the shower or bath, anything wet, as i also believe it loosens you up. So this one night i came home and she was in the shower. I was right outside the bathroom when i heard the water stop and so i opened the door slightly and said "keep the water running, I'm coming to join you.". I put my hand in and flicked the lights of as i entered the hot steamy bathroom. In no time i was naked and i stepped into the shower bath with her. She handed me the gel soap and i quickly sqeezed some out onto her soft body. A lathered her up and began runbing all over her. Stopped for a second to give her a hug. I can feel our 2 bodies pressed against each other and i start getting hard. We get on our knees in an intimate moment together, kissing and fondling each other. It's so hot in here we turn the shower head so that the water is running down the wall. We start playing around, slipping and sliding in a akward humorous yet very sexual way. I can't see a thing but can feel all parts of her body sliding against me. There's something I've wanted to try, so i get her up and push her legs together. I start thigh fucking her and she giggles. "This is so hot" she says before biting and sucking on my lips. "ok" I pick her up and she wraps and crosses her legs around me as i slip my penis into her. Grabbing chunks of arse i push her up against the now warm tiles where the water is flowing. We're making the most intimate love. We're struggling to catch our breaths and we can't stop laughing and moaning. I put her down and give her the detachable shower head as skew gets on her knees. Apart from me and the friends in her drawer, the shower head also makes uncontrollably moan for more. She sucking my dick, holding it like a microphone ( because we all love to sing in the shower) and sucking the tip. She does this thing where she gently holds the tip in her mouth using her teeth and massages it with her tongue. She is trying her best but the water pressure on her clit is getting the best of her. I hear her drop the shower head and finish herself off with her fingers. I grab my dick, get on my knees and proceed to jerk it. I feel her legs spread either side of me and image her body looking so inviting in front of me. She's caressing my legs and balls. I feel it coming so i lean over her and release my warm load of cum onto her. She grabs my hand and uses it to rub the cum all over her stomach and tits. I love these sensual moments we have. I put my arms around her and pull her towards me. I hold her as I lay back and she lays on top of me. We sit there in the dark for a minute kissing and caressing eachother.

The end.
What did you think? How would you change it?