Working on a new story . . . can someone take a re
If anyone happens to come across this entry please take a read and let me know what you think. It's missing the intro which I have partially written and it misses the fun part at the end but I'm mainly curious if this works at all.
I have not proof read this yet so please pardon the typos, terrible grammar, and general terrible parts.
Thank you for taking the time to look at this,
Michelle
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”What’s your deal?” Alexander asked is a deep growling voice. He closed the distance between us in the room and stood in front of me.
“Wha, what do you mean?” I asked back as I swallowed hard.
“You’ve been staring at me ever since I walked into your office. It’s because I’m a black man isn’t it. You think I’m gonna to rob you or something.”
“No, not at all,” I protested.
“That’s what it is. Isn’t it?”
“No! I didn’t think that at all,” I meekly protested as Alexander stood inches from me with my body pressing into the wall. I was trying to escape this conversation but there was no way out. Alexander towered over me and was easily more than a hundred pounds heavier.
“Then what is it you little bitch?” Alexander hissed.
I looked toward the door for an escape. Alexander placed his hands against the wall on either side of me. A faint smell of his cologne filled my nose.
“I, I” I stopped.
“What?”
“I thought…think you…are really handsome.” I stammered the partial truth while dipping my head.
Alexander lifted my chin up with his finger, “That’s not all is it? What else?”
“Nothing. That’s it.” I lied trying not to let my eyes give me away.
“awww, the scared little bitch is going to try and lie to me. Why are you fucking lying to me? Let’s hear it. Now!”
“You’re in good shape. That’s it. Really. You look really good in that suit and you look like you’re in good shape,” I said looking up at Alexander.
Alexander smiled, “What did you like?”
“Just…I mean…you…look nice,” I couldn’t put any words together and my face flushed. From the moment I saw him in my office it was clear what stuck out. It was a perfectly tailored suit but left very little to the imagination about what was underneath.
“Were you looking at my face? Maybe my back and arms? What about my chest. You could have been looking at my legs. What was it?”
“Umm…all of that,” I swallowed hard. It was the firmness of his ass and the outline of his cock but I couldn’t say that.
“Was it something else? Maybe the shy little white girl was peaking at something she’s never seen before. Something she’s a little curious about.”
“We…we should probably be getting back to the office.”
Alexander reached out and let his hand slide down my forearm to my hand. He turned my palm toward him. “Maybe you were looking at this. You know, I’ve been trying to keep from having a hard-on ever since I say you dancing in your office. You’re tight body moving in such a sexy way. Your pretty little dress hugging your curves.” Alexander moved my hand onto his cock and held my hand there.
I tried to pull my hand back. “I…umm…we really should get back…they’ll be…,” I tried to speak but no words came out.
“You’re lying to me again aren’t you. There’s no one else in the office and you locked the door when we left.”
“Go ahead, feel that. Slid your hand over that cock. That’s because of you. I’ve been staring at your ass all this time and my cock just keeps wanting to get harder and harder.” Alexander released my hand but I didn’t take it off of Alexander’s cock.
“There you go. You like the feel of that don’t you. Sweet white bitch likes what she feels. Go ahead, take it out of my pants.” Alexander reached out for my other hand and felt the notebook I was carrying. He threw it down and papers slid across the floor. For some reason I wanted to protest the fact my notebook was on the floor but I wasn’t saying a word about my hands on his cock.
I fumbled with the belt before finally getting it to pop free. Then my fingers unfastened his pants and lowered the zipper. I stopped and looked into Alexander’s eyes.
“Go ahead. Reach in there and get your prize,” he snickered. “Let me see your little hands wrapped around my cock.”
I looked down as I slipped my hand into the opening of his pants and felt his cock. Alexander pushed his pants over his hips and his cock slipped free. I was now holding the thick black cock in my hands and I started to stroke him.
“Your a good little bitch. Someone’s trained you well. Stroke it nice and slow. What do you think? That’s what you were looking at. Wasn’t it?”
I tried to speak but not words came out of my mouth.
Alexander raised his arms and pulled me toward him. His cock pressed between us and the tip of his cock came up to mid-chest. I looked down at the tip of his cock. It was bigger than the palm of my hand. Alexander unzipped my dress and slid his fingers inside the open material. His hands came to rest on my bra which he unfastened as if he had done it hundreds of times before.
“I like my whores naked. When you’re sucking my cock like to see your naked little body. Look at your little white girl titties. I bet that’s what your husband does. Doesn’t he? He likes to watch you on your knees when you suck his cock.”
“How many cocks have you sucked? Five, ten? Nah, you’re too sweet. Probably only one and you made that motherfucker wait to even get that little kiss on the tip. You didn’t even make him cum did you?”
My face turned red with embarrassment. I looked down and saw Alexander’s hard cock in my hands and pressed against my chest. My dress was laying on the carpet around my ankles and my bra was bunched on top.
“I’ve nev…never done that.”
“Done what, sucked cock?” Alexander’s hands slid down my sides until they touched the material of my panties. “Take your panties off. Remember, I like my bitches completely naked.”
I released Alexander’s cock and moved my hands to my hips. Bending slightly I pushed my panties over my hips and ass and let them drop into the pile of my clothes at my feet. My face was inches from the thick black cock in front of me.
“So you’re telling me you’re not married. Do you at least have a boyfriend that fucking that tight ass?”
“I have a boyfriend but we haven’t done…”
“You’re fucking k**ding me. He hasn’t fucked you yet? How long have you two been together?”
“Three month…” I let the words trail off. The irony of what was happening caught up to me. Here was naked with some guy I had only met an hour before and the man I was dating for three months hadn’t even seen me naked.
“Three months? What! The! Fuck? Unless he’s some fucking sissy-bitch you should have been servicing his cock a long ass time ago. Come here,” Alexander commanded.
My legs felt leaden but I forced them to move. Alexander slid one hand up my back and under my hair and held the back of my head. His other hand reached down and grasped my ass with his fingers slipping between my cheeks coming to rest on my anus and pussy.
I have not proof read this yet so please pardon the typos, terrible grammar, and general terrible parts.
Thank you for taking the time to look at this,
Michelle
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”What’s your deal?” Alexander asked is a deep growling voice. He closed the distance between us in the room and stood in front of me.
“Wha, what do you mean?” I asked back as I swallowed hard.
“You’ve been staring at me ever since I walked into your office. It’s because I’m a black man isn’t it. You think I’m gonna to rob you or something.”
“No, not at all,” I protested.
“That’s what it is. Isn’t it?”
“No! I didn’t think that at all,” I meekly protested as Alexander stood inches from me with my body pressing into the wall. I was trying to escape this conversation but there was no way out. Alexander towered over me and was easily more than a hundred pounds heavier.
“Then what is it you little bitch?” Alexander hissed.
I looked toward the door for an escape. Alexander placed his hands against the wall on either side of me. A faint smell of his cologne filled my nose.
“I, I” I stopped.
“What?”
“I thought…think you…are really handsome.” I stammered the partial truth while dipping my head.
Alexander lifted my chin up with his finger, “That’s not all is it? What else?”
“Nothing. That’s it.” I lied trying not to let my eyes give me away.
“awww, the scared little bitch is going to try and lie to me. Why are you fucking lying to me? Let’s hear it. Now!”
“You’re in good shape. That’s it. Really. You look really good in that suit and you look like you’re in good shape,” I said looking up at Alexander.
Alexander smiled, “What did you like?”
“Just…I mean…you…look nice,” I couldn’t put any words together and my face flushed. From the moment I saw him in my office it was clear what stuck out. It was a perfectly tailored suit but left very little to the imagination about what was underneath.
“Were you looking at my face? Maybe my back and arms? What about my chest. You could have been looking at my legs. What was it?”
“Umm…all of that,” I swallowed hard. It was the firmness of his ass and the outline of his cock but I couldn’t say that.
“Was it something else? Maybe the shy little white girl was peaking at something she’s never seen before. Something she’s a little curious about.”
“We…we should probably be getting back to the office.”
Alexander reached out and let his hand slide down my forearm to my hand. He turned my palm toward him. “Maybe you were looking at this. You know, I’ve been trying to keep from having a hard-on ever since I say you dancing in your office. You’re tight body moving in such a sexy way. Your pretty little dress hugging your curves.” Alexander moved my hand onto his cock and held my hand there.
I tried to pull my hand back. “I…umm…we really should get back…they’ll be…,” I tried to speak but no words came out.
“You’re lying to me again aren’t you. There’s no one else in the office and you locked the door when we left.”
“Go ahead, feel that. Slid your hand over that cock. That’s because of you. I’ve been staring at your ass all this time and my cock just keeps wanting to get harder and harder.” Alexander released my hand but I didn’t take it off of Alexander’s cock.
“There you go. You like the feel of that don’t you. Sweet white bitch likes what she feels. Go ahead, take it out of my pants.” Alexander reached out for my other hand and felt the notebook I was carrying. He threw it down and papers slid across the floor. For some reason I wanted to protest the fact my notebook was on the floor but I wasn’t saying a word about my hands on his cock.
I fumbled with the belt before finally getting it to pop free. Then my fingers unfastened his pants and lowered the zipper. I stopped and looked into Alexander’s eyes.
“Go ahead. Reach in there and get your prize,” he snickered. “Let me see your little hands wrapped around my cock.”
I looked down as I slipped my hand into the opening of his pants and felt his cock. Alexander pushed his pants over his hips and his cock slipped free. I was now holding the thick black cock in my hands and I started to stroke him.
“Your a good little bitch. Someone’s trained you well. Stroke it nice and slow. What do you think? That’s what you were looking at. Wasn’t it?”
I tried to speak but not words came out of my mouth.
Alexander raised his arms and pulled me toward him. His cock pressed between us and the tip of his cock came up to mid-chest. I looked down at the tip of his cock. It was bigger than the palm of my hand. Alexander unzipped my dress and slid his fingers inside the open material. His hands came to rest on my bra which he unfastened as if he had done it hundreds of times before.
“I like my whores naked. When you’re sucking my cock like to see your naked little body. Look at your little white girl titties. I bet that’s what your husband does. Doesn’t he? He likes to watch you on your knees when you suck his cock.”
“How many cocks have you sucked? Five, ten? Nah, you’re too sweet. Probably only one and you made that motherfucker wait to even get that little kiss on the tip. You didn’t even make him cum did you?”
My face turned red with embarrassment. I looked down and saw Alexander’s hard cock in my hands and pressed against my chest. My dress was laying on the carpet around my ankles and my bra was bunched on top.
“I’ve nev…never done that.”
“Done what, sucked cock?” Alexander’s hands slid down my sides until they touched the material of my panties. “Take your panties off. Remember, I like my bitches completely naked.”
I released Alexander’s cock and moved my hands to my hips. Bending slightly I pushed my panties over my hips and ass and let them drop into the pile of my clothes at my feet. My face was inches from the thick black cock in front of me.
“So you’re telling me you’re not married. Do you at least have a boyfriend that fucking that tight ass?”
“I have a boyfriend but we haven’t done…”
“You’re fucking k**ding me. He hasn’t fucked you yet? How long have you two been together?”
“Three month…” I let the words trail off. The irony of what was happening caught up to me. Here was naked with some guy I had only met an hour before and the man I was dating for three months hadn’t even seen me naked.
“Three months? What! The! Fuck? Unless he’s some fucking sissy-bitch you should have been servicing his cock a long ass time ago. Come here,” Alexander commanded.
My legs felt leaden but I forced them to move. Alexander slid one hand up my back and under my hair and held the back of my head. His other hand reached down and grasped my ass with his fingers slipping between my cheeks coming to rest on my anus and pussy.
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