Gather Round, it's time for a bedtime story..
Alrighty then..., so I was going thru some of my older blogs and writings (from other sites) and I thought this might be a good place to share this little example of bad writing. (i'm just being hard on myself)
Anyway, I wrote this about 5 years ago for a friend and I've uploaded it on my page at Imagefap & showitoff... If anyone likes it, I'll dig out some more.
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An Episode of Desire
by
RedFox
She could feel his presence just behind her…. His breaths made the hair on her neck tingle… as his hands began to caress her shoulder, she could feel her nipples harden…. Then one of his hands moved her long dark hair to one side and began to kiss her neck…. Starting at the base, he slowly kiss repeatedly up her neck until he was up to her ear… She let out a quite moan when he started to nibble her ear…
While his lips were preoccupied with her lovely neck, his hands had continued to caress her arms and shoulders… He was starting to nibble her ears, his hands had slowly worked their way up her arms, down her shoulders, and then reached around to start massaging her breasts…. She let out another moan as he started to massage her breasts threw her shirt…. His fingers exploring every crevice of her cleavage. Working the flesh in a rhythmic fashion… His big hands having a surprisingly gentle feel as his thumbs made certain that her nipples got plenty of attention… Nipples that seemed to get harder with each stroke of his thumbs…
Abandoning all attempts at self control, she slowly started to grind her ass back into his crouch… Her pussy was already tingling with the feeling of a pulsing bulge pressing back on her ass… Her breathing get deeper as she felt her skin rise in temperature. Her heart racing… beating so hard, she could hear it…
All she could think of was what was behind his bulging jeans… Pressing her ass harder against him… Her hands slipped back behind her back… She slid her hands along his hips then grabbed his ass. Pulling it hard into her own…
Suddenly, he stopped. Stepped back. And spun her around… Looking into his eyes, She could see the same lustful desire that she was feeling…. Slowly her hands moved along his chest, working her way down to his waist… Her hands slipped down along his crotch. Lightly rubbing her fingers along his twitching bulge… Now it was his time to moan as her hands caressed him… With her hand firmly against his crotch, she walked him backward before pushing him back onto the couch… She then dropped down to her knees, her hands never leaving his bulging pants… Slowly unlatching his belt. She then unzipped his jeans and pulled them away from the object of her desire… Leaning in, she kissed the bulge that twitched behind the now stretched fabric of his underwear… Pulling the fabric away, his cock sprang from its prison… She stared at it for a moment, as it stood there, pulsing with his heart beat… She could see the beginning of pre-cum form at the tip… Starting at the base, she started to kiss it up along the shaft. He moaned as she licked the moisture from the head… Then without warning, she sucked it into her mouth. Running her tongue around the head while her lips moved up and down the shaft… Sucking in with each upstroke. One hand moved along the base of his cock while the other massaged his balls with firm yet gentle pressure that caused him to let out groan of pleasure… Feeling his balls tighten up, she increased the intensity of her activities… Releasing his cock from her mouth only long enough to run her tongue along his balls and up the shaft before plunging his cock back into her lush mouth… When she felt his body suddenly tense up, she released his member from her lips and quickly stroked her closed hand along his shaft. He started to let out a load groan. She quickly moved down to suck on his cock as he started to climax!!! His cum shot against the back of her throat. She continued to suck on his cock as the hot, salty liquid flowed into her mouth. She swallowed every drop… Only when he had stopped, did she release his cock from her warm, velvet mouth….
She looked up at him. He stared back down at her… She stood up and removed her closes... As she laid down on the bed, her lover moved down to allow easy access to her now dripping pussy…
As he moved down between her legs, he started to kiss the inside of her thighs… Slowly working up until he reached her shaved pussy… It glistened with wetness as he kissed his all around it, never getting all the way to it… She arched her back in desire and moaned in frustration…. Without waiting for him, she reached down, grabbed the back of his head, and shoved it into her pussy!!!! Sensing her desire, he wrapped his arms around her raised legs, pulling her ass closer… Then he started to kiss the lips of her pussy. Tasting her sweat juices with the flick of his tongue along the crack of her cunt!!!! As he continued to kiss and lick, her pussy lips swelled and slowly opened up to reveal the opening to her inner sanctum… She squirmed as he focused on her clit… Alternating between kissing and licking it. Occasionally giving it a gentle nibble, driving her crazy…. He then moved down and ran his tongue along the crack of her cunt before shoving his tongue deep into her pussy… Using her moans as a guide, he moved his tongue in and out of her love canal… Her eyes closed as she enjoyed the deep pleasure the emanated from his ministrations… As he alternated between her clit and tight pussy, her moaned loader and louder and louder… Suddenly, the buildup of pleasure was too much to bare. Her back arched and she let out a scream of pleasure!!!... her lover, hearing her pleasure, pulled her ass tighter to his face. While she was quivering in climax, he intensely flicked his tongue across her clit. Quickly building her up to a second orgasm!!! She threw her head back and let out a primal scream of pleasure as the incredibly strong orgasm racked her body with pleasure….. After what seemed an eternity, she collapsed down onto the bed…. A blissful smile on her face….
As she laid on the bed, he stood up and removed his clothes… Looking down , he could see her body glistening with sweat… She looked up at him… A look of longing desire in her eyes…. She slid up the bed and slowly spread her legs… Needing little encouragement, he moved in between her legs. Kissing his way up her body. Once he was face to face, his cock hovering, twitching, hovered only inches above her pussy… It pulsed, straining to reach the wet warmth of her love canal. He moved in, rubbing his cock up and down her cunt… Reaching down, he grab his cock, and again rubbed the head along her wet pussy lips… she moaned in frustration, raising her hips, trying to reach his cock…. Finally, he positioned his cock directly against her love canal… With one firm motion, his cock glided deep into her pussy, burying his cock up to the balls into her cunt… She moaned loudly and bucked her hips up to meet his motions… His rock hard cock pulsed deep inside her and he marveled at how hot and wet her tight pussy was!!! Slowly, he backed out until the tip of his cock was just barely between her pussy lips… After a few moments, he shoved it deeply back in with such ferocity that she let out a scream of pleasure… He then start to rhythmically slide his cock in and out… She bucked her hips back up to meet him… While his cock was busy enjoying the wet tightness of her pussy, his lips were busy kissing her neck, his arms holding the bulk of his weight… Meanwhile, her hands were busy foundling her tits… Stroking and pulling on them… Occasionally twisting and pinching her nipples…. As he continued to pound away, her breathing got faster and deeper… Suddenly, she threw back her head. Her hands shot down to his ass. Grabbing it and grinding her pussy tightly against his crotch…. Within moments, he felt her pussy clamp down on his cock as she let out another scream!!! An intense orgasm shot threw her body…. After a few moments, she collapsed back onto the bed… He pulled out of her… Looking down at her beautiful body, he climbed off of her… As he stood up, she could see his cock, still rock hard, glistening with a coating of her juices…
She got onto all fours and slid back until her ass was at the edge of the bed… He moved behind her, taking his cock in his hand. Grabbing her waist with his free hand, he used his other to rub his cock along her ass… Rubbing the top of his cock under her pussy, then slowly gliding it up along the crack of her ass. Resting his cock on her ass crack, he took both hands and grabbed her hips… Slowly, he rhythmically slid his cock along the crack of her ass, enjoying the feeling of her ass cheeks on his cock… After she let out a pleading whimper, he took his cock back into his hand and guided it down to her pussy… Lining it up with her love canal, he inserted his cock only slightly… She tried to move her ass back, but without avail. He placed his hands back on her hips. And with one motion, his cock glided into her soaking wet pussy!!! She moaned and thrust her ass back against him… He paused for a moment, his cock buried deep into her pussy, slowly grinding his hips into hers… Then holding her hips in place, he started to thrust rhythmically. Each time, grinding deeply into her cunt!!! She thrust her ass back towards him and arched her back. Using one hand for support, her other hand grabbed one of his and placed it on her hanging tits. As his hand fondled her breasts, he felt her love canal squeezing down on his cock. Each time he pulled his cock back, her pussy sucked it back in!!! After a few minutes of this, her hips started to buck back and her pussy clamped down on his cock!!! Placing his hands back on her hips, he shoved her ass back onto his cock with such power, that she screamed in orgasmic pleasure!!!! He kept slamming his cock into her pussy in increasing speed and desire… Like a wild creature, he pounded way…. She felt his balls tense up… Suddenly, he pulled out and spun her around… With his cock mere inches from her face, she moved up and started sucking on his cock… His hands shot down and grabbed the sides of her head, shoving his cock deep into her mouth… she reached up and squeezed his ass… He let out a deep groan. The cum shot down the back of her throat… She continued to suck intensely, milking every drop out of his balls!!!! Not releasing his cock from her soft lips until she was certain that she had gotten every drop out…
He looked down, as she lovingly kissed and stroked his now semi limp cock. She stood up and embraced him… Moving back to the bed, she laid in his arm, slowing gliding her hand down along his chest and fondling his sleeping cock…. She knew it wouldn’t be long before he would be ready to go again…
End…
Anyway, I wrote this about 5 years ago for a friend and I've uploaded it on my page at Imagefap & showitoff... If anyone likes it, I'll dig out some more.
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An Episode of Desire
by
RedFox
She could feel his presence just behind her…. His breaths made the hair on her neck tingle… as his hands began to caress her shoulder, she could feel her nipples harden…. Then one of his hands moved her long dark hair to one side and began to kiss her neck…. Starting at the base, he slowly kiss repeatedly up her neck until he was up to her ear… She let out a quite moan when he started to nibble her ear…
While his lips were preoccupied with her lovely neck, his hands had continued to caress her arms and shoulders… He was starting to nibble her ears, his hands had slowly worked their way up her arms, down her shoulders, and then reached around to start massaging her breasts…. She let out another moan as he started to massage her breasts threw her shirt…. His fingers exploring every crevice of her cleavage. Working the flesh in a rhythmic fashion… His big hands having a surprisingly gentle feel as his thumbs made certain that her nipples got plenty of attention… Nipples that seemed to get harder with each stroke of his thumbs…
Abandoning all attempts at self control, she slowly started to grind her ass back into his crouch… Her pussy was already tingling with the feeling of a pulsing bulge pressing back on her ass… Her breathing get deeper as she felt her skin rise in temperature. Her heart racing… beating so hard, she could hear it…
All she could think of was what was behind his bulging jeans… Pressing her ass harder against him… Her hands slipped back behind her back… She slid her hands along his hips then grabbed his ass. Pulling it hard into her own…
Suddenly, he stopped. Stepped back. And spun her around… Looking into his eyes, She could see the same lustful desire that she was feeling…. Slowly her hands moved along his chest, working her way down to his waist… Her hands slipped down along his crotch. Lightly rubbing her fingers along his twitching bulge… Now it was his time to moan as her hands caressed him… With her hand firmly against his crotch, she walked him backward before pushing him back onto the couch… She then dropped down to her knees, her hands never leaving his bulging pants… Slowly unlatching his belt. She then unzipped his jeans and pulled them away from the object of her desire… Leaning in, she kissed the bulge that twitched behind the now stretched fabric of his underwear… Pulling the fabric away, his cock sprang from its prison… She stared at it for a moment, as it stood there, pulsing with his heart beat… She could see the beginning of pre-cum form at the tip… Starting at the base, she started to kiss it up along the shaft. He moaned as she licked the moisture from the head… Then without warning, she sucked it into her mouth. Running her tongue around the head while her lips moved up and down the shaft… Sucking in with each upstroke. One hand moved along the base of his cock while the other massaged his balls with firm yet gentle pressure that caused him to let out groan of pleasure… Feeling his balls tighten up, she increased the intensity of her activities… Releasing his cock from her mouth only long enough to run her tongue along his balls and up the shaft before plunging his cock back into her lush mouth… When she felt his body suddenly tense up, she released his member from her lips and quickly stroked her closed hand along his shaft. He started to let out a load groan. She quickly moved down to suck on his cock as he started to climax!!! His cum shot against the back of her throat. She continued to suck on his cock as the hot, salty liquid flowed into her mouth. She swallowed every drop… Only when he had stopped, did she release his cock from her warm, velvet mouth….
She looked up at him. He stared back down at her… She stood up and removed her closes... As she laid down on the bed, her lover moved down to allow easy access to her now dripping pussy…
As he moved down between her legs, he started to kiss the inside of her thighs… Slowly working up until he reached her shaved pussy… It glistened with wetness as he kissed his all around it, never getting all the way to it… She arched her back in desire and moaned in frustration…. Without waiting for him, she reached down, grabbed the back of his head, and shoved it into her pussy!!!! Sensing her desire, he wrapped his arms around her raised legs, pulling her ass closer… Then he started to kiss the lips of her pussy. Tasting her sweat juices with the flick of his tongue along the crack of her cunt!!!! As he continued to kiss and lick, her pussy lips swelled and slowly opened up to reveal the opening to her inner sanctum… She squirmed as he focused on her clit… Alternating between kissing and licking it. Occasionally giving it a gentle nibble, driving her crazy…. He then moved down and ran his tongue along the crack of her cunt before shoving his tongue deep into her pussy… Using her moans as a guide, he moved his tongue in and out of her love canal… Her eyes closed as she enjoyed the deep pleasure the emanated from his ministrations… As he alternated between her clit and tight pussy, her moaned loader and louder and louder… Suddenly, the buildup of pleasure was too much to bare. Her back arched and she let out a scream of pleasure!!!... her lover, hearing her pleasure, pulled her ass tighter to his face. While she was quivering in climax, he intensely flicked his tongue across her clit. Quickly building her up to a second orgasm!!! She threw her head back and let out a primal scream of pleasure as the incredibly strong orgasm racked her body with pleasure….. After what seemed an eternity, she collapsed down onto the bed…. A blissful smile on her face….
As she laid on the bed, he stood up and removed his clothes… Looking down , he could see her body glistening with sweat… She looked up at him… A look of longing desire in her eyes…. She slid up the bed and slowly spread her legs… Needing little encouragement, he moved in between her legs. Kissing his way up her body. Once he was face to face, his cock hovering, twitching, hovered only inches above her pussy… It pulsed, straining to reach the wet warmth of her love canal. He moved in, rubbing his cock up and down her cunt… Reaching down, he grab his cock, and again rubbed the head along her wet pussy lips… she moaned in frustration, raising her hips, trying to reach his cock…. Finally, he positioned his cock directly against her love canal… With one firm motion, his cock glided deep into her pussy, burying his cock up to the balls into her cunt… She moaned loudly and bucked her hips up to meet his motions… His rock hard cock pulsed deep inside her and he marveled at how hot and wet her tight pussy was!!! Slowly, he backed out until the tip of his cock was just barely between her pussy lips… After a few moments, he shoved it deeply back in with such ferocity that she let out a scream of pleasure… He then start to rhythmically slide his cock in and out… She bucked her hips back up to meet him… While his cock was busy enjoying the wet tightness of her pussy, his lips were busy kissing her neck, his arms holding the bulk of his weight… Meanwhile, her hands were busy foundling her tits… Stroking and pulling on them… Occasionally twisting and pinching her nipples…. As he continued to pound away, her breathing got faster and deeper… Suddenly, she threw back her head. Her hands shot down to his ass. Grabbing it and grinding her pussy tightly against his crotch…. Within moments, he felt her pussy clamp down on his cock as she let out another scream!!! An intense orgasm shot threw her body…. After a few moments, she collapsed back onto the bed… He pulled out of her… Looking down at her beautiful body, he climbed off of her… As he stood up, she could see his cock, still rock hard, glistening with a coating of her juices…
She got onto all fours and slid back until her ass was at the edge of the bed… He moved behind her, taking his cock in his hand. Grabbing her waist with his free hand, he used his other to rub his cock along her ass… Rubbing the top of his cock under her pussy, then slowly gliding it up along the crack of her ass. Resting his cock on her ass crack, he took both hands and grabbed her hips… Slowly, he rhythmically slid his cock along the crack of her ass, enjoying the feeling of her ass cheeks on his cock… After she let out a pleading whimper, he took his cock back into his hand and guided it down to her pussy… Lining it up with her love canal, he inserted his cock only slightly… She tried to move her ass back, but without avail. He placed his hands back on her hips. And with one motion, his cock glided into her soaking wet pussy!!! She moaned and thrust her ass back against him… He paused for a moment, his cock buried deep into her pussy, slowly grinding his hips into hers… Then holding her hips in place, he started to thrust rhythmically. Each time, grinding deeply into her cunt!!! She thrust her ass back towards him and arched her back. Using one hand for support, her other hand grabbed one of his and placed it on her hanging tits. As his hand fondled her breasts, he felt her love canal squeezing down on his cock. Each time he pulled his cock back, her pussy sucked it back in!!! After a few minutes of this, her hips started to buck back and her pussy clamped down on his cock!!! Placing his hands back on her hips, he shoved her ass back onto his cock with such power, that she screamed in orgasmic pleasure!!!! He kept slamming his cock into her pussy in increasing speed and desire… Like a wild creature, he pounded way…. She felt his balls tense up… Suddenly, he pulled out and spun her around… With his cock mere inches from her face, she moved up and started sucking on his cock… His hands shot down and grabbed the sides of her head, shoving his cock deep into her mouth… she reached up and squeezed his ass… He let out a deep groan. The cum shot down the back of her throat… She continued to suck intensely, milking every drop out of his balls!!!! Not releasing his cock from her soft lips until she was certain that she had gotten every drop out…
He looked down, as she lovingly kissed and stroked his now semi limp cock. She stood up and embraced him… Moving back to the bed, she laid in his arm, slowing gliding her hand down along his chest and fondling his sleeping cock…. She knew it wouldn’t be long before he would be ready to go again…
End…
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